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07 September 2005 @ 04:17 pm
La, la, la... killing time between classes, not doing reading or math like I should be, and really wishing I had money to get myself a sandwich.

Mm, but I do have a question, would anyone out there be willing to look over a Suguru-centic Gravitation fanfic I'm writing, and tell me what it is that I am doing wrong? I have about five chapters written, and sometimes I feel I'm hitting my mark and sometimes I feel like I'm not even hitting the broad side of the barn. It'd be really nice if I could get someone, other than my usual proofreader, to tell me what they think. If anyone has some time and would be willing to do me that big favor, I'd appreciate it.

And to keekercatt, I got 326 words written on the next chapter of Affair of the Necklace, but it's been so long that I have to re-read what I've already written.

Well, that killed some time. Guess I'll d/l more Fruits Basket manga. :)
~*split personality*~anomay on September 8th, 2005 05:08 am (UTC)
I'd love to read that Suguru fanfic of yours. You can send it off to me at ribbony at yahoo.com. The only thing is I probably will be able to get back to you after this weekend - is that ok?
Genesis Greygenesisgrey on September 11th, 2005 02:37 am (UTC)
That's cool, like I said, take your time. I just really apprciate you doing this. :)
Aja: Mizukiimayb1 on September 8th, 2005 02:54 pm (UTC)
Personally, I've never been able to get inside Suguru's head, but I'd be willing to read and give you feedback...
imayb1 -at- gmail.com
Genesis Greygenesisgrey on September 11th, 2005 02:38 am (UTC)
Yay! Thanks! I just need more opinions :)
patosan: Alexpatosan on September 9th, 2005 12:12 pm (UTC)
Well, I know I like everything you've written so far. I'm not exactly the most reliable person to be around at the moment, but I'm willing to give you feedback in my own time :D
Genesis Greygenesisgrey on September 11th, 2005 02:37 am (UTC)
That works. I just need some opinions beside my own. :) I'm not in any hurry with this fic... what's your e-mail?
patosanpatosan on September 11th, 2005 08:43 am (UTC)
patisan@gmail.com :D

I look forward to reading it
keekercatt: Elrohirkeekercatt on September 13th, 2005 02:33 am (UTC)
Tease. *smewch*