La, la, la... killing time between classes, not doing reading or math like I should be, and really wishing I had money to get myself a sandwich.

Mm, but I do have a question, would anyone out there be willing to look over a Suguru-centic Gravitation fanfic I'm writing, and tell me what it is that I am doing wrong? I have about five chapters written, and sometimes I feel I'm hitting my mark and sometimes I feel like I'm not even hitting the broad side of the barn. It'd be really nice if I could get someone, other than my usual proofreader, to tell me what they think. If anyone has some time and would be willing to do me that big favor, I'd appreciate it.

And to keekercatt, I got 326 words written on the next chapter of Affair of the Necklace, but it's been so long that I have to re-read what I've already written.

Well, that killed some time. Guess I'll d/l more Fruits Basket manga. :)